hurray!

[mingoes.livejournal.com]

Been working on this a bit too long...
but a word and pic, for the celebration of me being promoted to Captain ^^

-EDIT-

I've editted the picpoem in the hopes it is eligible for the GA fanbook.
I've been editing for quite some time, font/colour. etc. So this is the final result.

Summerlust

Comments

[wongkk.livejournal.com]

You would post this at lunchtime! My low blood sugar is playing tricks - I got "skin" and "lips" reversed in verse 2, line 2, which made interesting reading!

A Japanese friend who very much adores eating small red things (tomatoes, strawberries, cherries, red Smarties!) told me that there is a tradational game (maybe for weddings? can't remember exactly) which involves eating fruit hung off people - bit like apple-bobbing but with pepo instead of buckets of water! Your poem brought this to mind.

The initial "words" of each line of v2 are funny: ah mm oh you (- or You?)! Was that intentional??

I was going to grumble a tiny bit at you disappearing last week but I can see that you've been busy! Well done.

[gackt29.livejournal.com]

...Yummy~! LOL!! :P

[lilyginnyblack.livejournal.com]

Congrats! \(^0^)/

And, what a very smexy Word and Image, I quite like it. The whole thing is very sensual, yet in a very tastefully (no pun intended) way. In a certain way, it almost reminds me of Vanilla (though that could be that they both deal with naughtiness and food! o.O) Lol! xD Anyway, thanks for posting and sharing. ^^