I certainly like the IDEA of this but the wording's a bit clunky - and not quite combative enough for my liking (I mean, we're an army, aren't we?). I'd prefer something like, "Defying the darkness" or "In defiance of shadows" or something implying that we'll fight for our curved little sliver of light!
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Date: 2008-08-01 12:06 am (UTC)