http://jishcreator.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] jishcreator.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] gackt_army2008-10-29 12:24 am
Entry tags:

Word and Image

First one I have ever done. Hope you guys like it <3
And yes, it is my own work~
 
Marks of an unseen battle lie beneath my skin.
Bruised and torn are my thoughts.
Words unsaid and acts undone.
May they become reality?
Undying loyalty is unbeknownst.
Can it be returned?
Every waking moment thought, every sleeping moment dreamt.
Does my face even loom the shadows of your mind?
You've shattered my shield, and broken my sword.
Mind, heart, soul, and body are now vulnerable to you.
Your merest touch brings such joy, yet, can cause such misery.
Your mildest dissatisfaction belittles me.

So?
...
I am yours.

..Are you mine?



[identity profile] karadin.livejournal.com 2008-10-29 11:56 am (UTC)(link)
Please come back and credit your own work (if this is original)

did you mean to say 'may they become reality?'

[identity profile] kotonama.livejournal.com 2008-10-29 06:49 pm (UTC)(link)
I really like that...the mood of the poem really fits with Gackt's personality and the picture is chosen well!

[identity profile] wongkk.livejournal.com 2008-10-30 02:01 pm (UTC)(link)
This is a favourite era of mine for Gackt photos -the gangster look plus the long hair - so you score high from the start!

Gackt's expression is wonderfully ambiguous and you've suggested a good selection of thoughts (with hints of other actions and other stories) to account for it. Well put together!

[identity profile] bugackt.livejournal.com 2009-05-28 12:54 pm (UTC)(link)
Hello. Just wanna ask if you want to be credited as Jishcreator or yourself with your real name or nicknames? This is for the fanbook. Please reply ASAP. Thanks!

Nice work, btw. ^^