http://kayashi-chan.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] kayashi-chan.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] gackt_army2008-09-20 08:02 pm
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My Samurai

An entry for the Gackt as Uesugi Kenshin Challenge:

My Samurai

Your sword protects me, my feeble body.
Your arms warm me, my cold body.
Your smile brightness my day, depressing as they are.
Your voice melts my heart, which belongs to you.

I will follow you forever, my strong samurai.
I will be just one step behind you, whenever you need me.
Just look back, and I will be there.
I will never leave your side.


My samurai, to protect me with his life.
To protect his Dear. His beloved Dear.
My samurai who is strong and wise. 

 

[identity profile] wongkk.livejournal.com 2008-09-21 08:56 am (UTC)(link)
Very nice to see another entry for this challenge! Well done - it's been a bit quiet for a while. I keep hoping for inspiration myself but there are no new messages in my Muse Inbox (not even any spam ha ha) Actually, I lie - there WAS a decent Saiyuki fic but no use here.

It's interesting to read your ideas. Did you have any particular song or Fuurin Kazan episode or Kenshin picture in mind, I wonder? I'm just being nosy about where you got the ideas from!

Thanks for posting.

[identity profile] wongkk.livejournal.com 2008-09-21 07:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Hello - me again! I keep thinking about your poem. I do like the way that you've brought yourself (or the poet's self) into the words; this is different from most of the other entries, I think, and is what keeps bringing your piece back to my mind. It's a nice touch - well done!

[identity profile] wongkk.livejournal.com 2008-09-22 01:40 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks for the reply. I enjoyed this video a lot too - think I saw it over at Uesugi Gakuto. That one and yours are both nice pieces of work. (Yeah - of course we read your stuff!)

[identity profile] lilyginnyblack.livejournal.com 2008-09-23 01:43 am (UTC)(link)
Oh, lovely poem! *0* I think wongkk summed it all up quite nicely and I would adore reading another poem from you. ^^