ext_9416 ([identity profile] karadin.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] gackt_army 2008-09-23 12:11 am (UTC)

You are leaving it to your viewers to add the 'u' at the end of you

There is a letter past the o in the last sentence, is this an a for the word away? is it another g?

You've also kerned and tracked the text so it reads as a mass and not as two separate thoughts.

The squiggle lines at the bottom are also ambiguous, as they could read as a signature of some sort.

If a viewer has to struggle to understand an image, even for a half-second, then as a graphic work, it loses it's power.

I was merely asking if these particular choices were intentional. And, as you have told me they are, that's all I need to know.


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